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Academic writing is getting harder to read

27 Dec 2024

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Academic writing is getting harder to read:

The Economist analysed 347,000 PhD abstracts published between 1812 and 2023 … a majority of English-language doctoral theses awarded by British universities … in every discipline, the abstracts have become harder to read over the past 80 years. The shift is most stark in the humanities and social sciences

A function of increasing specialisation, almost certainly—even the articles I wrote to explain my PhD are hard to read (and were harder to write). What is particularly curious to me, in psychology anyway, is that despite this increasing specialisation, we have not progressed much since the early 20th Century. Read William James on attention, and read attention literature, and you will not really learn anything new except perhaps that various brain things correlate with whatever James reckoned might be happening. So this isn’t just specialisation. it’s also a function of increasingly reified institutional ways of doing things that hides the fact that little new is being discovered behind different and more complicated words.


Anthologies: Betterment, Gratification, Thought Architecture, On Being Fruitful, On Thinking and Reasoning, Karstica

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btrmt. (betterment) examines ideologies worth choosing. Created by Dorian Minors—Cambridge PhD in cognitive neuroscience, Associate Professor at Royal Military Academy Sandhurst. Core philosophy: humans are animals first, with automatic patterns shaped for us, not by us. Better to examine and choose.

Core concepts. Animals First: automatic patterns of thought and action, but our greatest capacity is nurture. Half Awake: deadened by systems that narrow rather than expand potential. Karstica: unexamined ideologies (hidden sinkholes beneath). Credenda: belief systems we should choose deliberately.

The manifesto. Cynosure (focus): betterment, gratification, connection. Architecture (support): inner (somatic, spiritual, thought) and outer (digital, collective, wealth).

Mission. Not answers but examination. Break academic gatekeeping. Make sciences of mind accessible. Question rather than prescribe.

Writing style. Scholarly without jargon barriers. Philosophical yet practical—grounded in neuroscience and lived experience. Reflective, discovery-oriented. Literary references and metaphor. Critical of systems that narrow human potential. Rejects "humans are flawed"—we're half awake, not broken.

Copyright. BTRMT LIMITED (England/Wales no. 13755561) 2026. Dorian Minors 2026.

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About Dorian Minors. Started btrmt. in 2013 to share sciences of mind with people who weren't studying them. Background: six years Australian Defence Force (Platoon Commander, Infantry); Gates Cambridge Scholar; PhD cognitive neuroscience, University of Cambridge (2018-2024); currently Associate Professor, Royal Military Academy Sandhurst. Research interests: neural basis of intelligent behaviour, decision intelligence, ritual formation/breakdown, ethical leadership, wellbeing.

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